The Lovecraft series continues.

Raw Feed (2005): “Polaris”, H. P. Lovecraft, 1918.

This is a prime exhibit in T. E. D. Klein’s argument that Lovecraft was Dunsanian before reading Lord Dunsany.

Written in 1918, it features a lot of the nomenclature (including the Pnakotic Manuscript) from Lovecraft’s Dunsanian tales. It also deals with dreams, specifically the narrator who has gone to a dream world and, while on guard against a yellow horde coming from the polar regions, has fallen asleep and can’t wake up from “this unnatural dream of a house of stone and brick” that is our world; he feels guilty about letting down his friend Alos from the dream world.

As Lovecraft himself would later note, the syntax of Lovecraft in his Dunsanian mode and that of Lord Dunsany himself are both much influenced by the phrases and cadence of the King James Bible.



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The Lovecraft series continues.

Raw Feed (2005, 2015): “Dagon”, H. P. Lovecraft, 1917.

Dagon and Other Macabre TalesThis story is, of course, an earlier working of the ideas — sunken cities rising out of the water again, older, alien races surviving — of Lovecraft’s more celebrated “The Call of Cthulhu“. We even have the same sort of language.

Rereading this again in 2015, I found I had forgotten the details of this story (I think I was confusing it with Lovecraft’s “The Temple” since it has no U-boat seeing underwater ruins.)Annotated Lovecraft

The annotations were somewhat useful – particularly the sourcing of a National Geographic article on islands appearing from nowhere.

I also wasn’t aware that many read the ending of this story – the hand at a window – as an hallucination. I agree with S. T. Joshi that a literal reading is possible.

I also thought it interesting that, in this 1917 story, we have the possibility of a war-weakened human population being pretty to invasion from the deeps. We also have, in the descent into the crater, another example of subterranean horrors (though not, strictly speaking, underground) in Lovecraft’s fiction.


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“Through the Gates of the Silver Key”

The Lovecraft series continues.

Raw Feed (2006, 2016): “Through the Gates of the Silver Key”, H. P. Lovecraft and E. Hoffmann Price, 1932 — 1933.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

I am curious as to how much Price contributed to this story.

There is a coherence here in tying this story and the cosmic voyages of Carter to not only the rationalistic background of the Cthulhu Mythos and also the Dunsanian dream stories of Lovecraft, much more coherence than the earlier “The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath“.

To be sure, the links and explanation still are fairly loose though the story links pretty tightly to the other Carter stories making it quite clear that we’re talking about the same character. I suspect that the concept of a universe with stories set in different times with different characters yet featuring consistent geographies, histories, technologies, and concepts, came along after Lovecraft. Heinlein’s Future History may be the first. Continue reading ““Through the Gates of the Silver Key””

“The Silver Key”

Well I work on getting some new stuff out, I’ll continue with the Lovecraft series.

This is a significant Lovecraft story due to its autobiographical elements.

Raw Feed (2005, 2012): “The Silver Key”, H. P. Lovecraft, 1926.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

When I first read this story, I wondered if it was written before Lovecraft’s “The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath” because, though it covers all of Carter’s life, it makes no real mention of the events of that story though it is listed as being a 1926 story and “The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath” is dated 1926-1927. After reading it, I found out this story was written first.

It’s not unusual for Lovecraft stories to begin with a philosophical statement — “The Call of Cthulhu” being the most famous example. Here, though, the first five-and-a-half pages of an 18 page story are taken up with what seems to be, from what I’ve read Joshi say of Lovecraft’s personal philosophy, an autobiographical description of his character. Continue reading ““The Silver Key””

“The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath”

While I slowly get a review of Henri Barbusse’s Under Fire, written, the Lovecraft series will continue.

Raw Feed (2005): “The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath”, H. P. Lovecraft, 1927.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

I had more tolerance for this story upon reading it a second time, after an interval of twenty-some years.

It’s obviously Lovecraft operating under the influence of Lord Dunsany in his themes, images, and language.

I’m also more patient with long passages of description which this style features.

But I can’t say I liked it all that much more. I did, though, find it more interesting.

First, given that the city Randolph Carter quests for turns out to be a transposed version of his childhood memories of Providence, Rhode Island, I’d be curious as to how long Lovecraft had this story in his head before he wrote it in 1927. I suspect that it was a metaphorical reaction to his return to Providence in 1926 after living in New York City. Continue reading ““The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath””

“The Statement of Randolph Carter”

While I work on the backlog of new reviews, I’m continuing the Lovecraft series.

Raw Feed (2005): “The Statement of Randolph Carter”, H. P. Lovecraft, 1919.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

This 1919 story is fun even though it’s early Lovecraft operating in a more traditional horror vein.

It’s most notable for the introduction of the Randolph Carter who features in more strange, Dunsanian stories later on. Still, I liked this story with indescribable subterranean horrors and a young Randolph Carter deemed to nervous and unsteady to accompany his friend Harley Warren who, of course, meets a bad end beneath a cemetery in Gainesville, Florida.

This end is a bit jokey (and, the device of the telephone wire shows Lovecraft’s interest in technology) with some unnamed entity calling up Carter and telling him that “YOU FOOL, WARREN IS DEAD!”


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Storm of Steel

Review: Storm of Steel, Ernst Jűnger, trans. Michael Hoffman, 1920, 1961, 2003.Storm of Steel

Ernst Jűnger’s World War One memoir is striking for what it doesn’t have.

Jűnger and his comrades don’t speak of why they fight.

There is no lingering while Jűnger talks of the many strange deaths, injuries, and maimings that war can bring. What little emotion there is is not horror.

There is no account of Jűnger before or after the war.

There is no description of basic training.

War is a test, a skill that Jűnger doesn’t just need to master to survive. He needs to master it to become the man he wishes to be.

Jűnger was not a common soldier who endured war to protect his nation and loved ones or to fulfill a duty. He was a born warrior.

When he steps off the train at the book’s opening, the test and rapture of battle await:

Full of awe and incredulity, we listened to the slow grinding pulse of the front, a rhythm we were to become mightily familiar with over the years. The white ball of a shrapnel shell melted far off, suffusing the grey December sky. The breath of battle blew across to us, and we shuddered. Did we sense that almost all of us – some sooner, some later – were to be consumed by it, on days when the dark grumbling yonder would crash over our heads like an incessant thunder?

… Grown up in an age of security, we shared a yearning for danger, for the experience of the extraordinary. We were enraptured by war. … Surely the war had to supply us with what we wanted; the great, the overwhelming, the hallowed experience.

The German Army was not Jűnger’s first military experience. He so wanted to see war he had joined the French Foreign Legion in 1913 when he was 18. His father pulled strings to get him released.

Jűnger learned the science of war well. The war is still going on when the book ends with him winning Germany’s highest medal, the pour le Mérite, commonly called the Blue Max. He was the youngest soldier ever awarded it. But two bullet wounds suffered in August 1918 put him out of the war for good. They were the last of 14 wounds, not counting “trifles such as ricochets and grazes”:

five bullets, two shell splinters, one shrapnel ball, four hand-grenade splinters and two bullet splinters.

But Jűnger had a long life in front of him. He died at age 102 having not only been a man of letters including several works of magical realism and a science fiction novel called The Glass Bees which got a foreword by Bruce Sterling when re-released in 2000. He was also a distinguished entomologist, and devotee of mind expanding drugs and dropped acid with its inventor Albert Hoffmann.

Storm of Steel was a project he returned to again and again. Originally published in a different version in 1920 and privately printed for his fellow veterans, its sparse style comes from Jűnger not needing to explain all the details to a civilian audience in the manner of Henri Barbusse’s 1917 war novel Under Fire which I’ll be looking at it a future post.

Its long German title translates as In Storms of Steel: from the Diary of a Shock Troop Commander, Ernst Jűnger, War Volunteer and subsequently Lieutenant in the Rifle Regiment of Prince Albrecht of Prussia (73rd Hanoverian Regiment). Those diaries, in fact, were published in 2005.

While the German soldiers in Jűnger’s book do not speak of why they fight, that may not have been true of the original version. Translator Hoffman notes the first version ended with

Though force without and barbarity within conglomerate in somber clouds, yet so long as the blade of a sword will strike a spark in the night may it be said: Germany lives and Germany shall never go under!

That tone no doubt appealed to a fellow veteran, Adolf Hitler. Jűnger, though possessing a lifelong contempt for democracy, didn’t have time for the Nazis or Hitler. Fortunately, Hitler did have time for Jűnger when the Gestapo wanted to execute him due to his personal affiliations with members of the Stauffenberg group who tried to assassinate Hitler.

There were, in fact, eight different versions of this memoir. The last was in 1961 which this version is a translation of. Hoffman spends a lot of his introduction complaining about Basil Creighton’s 1929 English translation of the 1924 version. A 1934 version, dubbed “the quiet version” by one critic, may have further reduced the nationalist flavor of the text.

Online research tells me that the first version, however poorly translated, had more details on the stormtroop tactics that Jűnger help develop. While the text gives some flavor of them, Jűnger in no way presents them in a systematic and detailed way.

Jűnger’s text is also largely free of dates though one can figure out the battles he’s talking about. He does assign a date for the chapter “The Great Battle”: March 21, 1918, the beginning of the St. Michael Offensive which pushed the Allied lines back 14 miles in places, the largest movement of the war.

This chapter is the heart of the book, the revelry, ecstasy, and chaos of battle – an offensive at last for the Germans:

As we advanced, we were in the grip of a berserk rage. The overwhelming desire to kill lent wings to my stride. Raged squeezed bitter tears from my eyes.

The immense desire to destroy that overhung the battlefield precipitated a red mist in our brains. We called out sobbing and stammering fragments of sentences to one another, and an impartial observer might have concluded that we were all ecstatically happy.

Jűnger’s account of that day is swirling, restless, hyperactive, brutal:

Here I saw that any defender who continued to empty his pistol into the bodies of the attackers four or five paces away could not expect any mercy when they were upon him. The fighter, who sees a bloody mist in front of his eyes as he attacks, doesn’t want prisoners; he wants to kill.

But the book has quieter moments.

There is the cycle of the German soldier’s day in the trenches, the endless constructing and maintaining of fortifications, the thoughts that go through Jűnger’s mind as he walks sentry duty at night in the “eerie desolation” and “curious … emotional cold”, and the trapping of rats.

Jűnger expresses fondness for the French families he stays with in his time in the rear area.

There are the observations of nature “pleasantly intact” with birds singing in no-man’s land. In the land immediately to the rear

the war had given it a suggestion of heroism and melancholy; its almost excessive blooming was even more radiant and narcotic than usual.

There is humor of a dark sort.

Jűnger talks of one soldier

festooned with weapons – apart from his rifle, from which he was inseparable, he wore numerous daggers, pistols, hand-grenades and a torch tucked into his belt. Encountering him in the trench was like suddenly coming upon an Armenian or somesuch. For a while he used to carry hand-grenades loose in his pockets as well, till that habit gave him a very nasty turn, which he related one evening. He had been digging around in his pocket, trying to pull out his pipe, when it got caught in the loop of a hand-grenade and accidentally pulled it off.

Jűnger says that cold and boredom are the soldier’s greatest enemies. One of his passing amusements, with another NCO, is to collect unexploded artillery shells, pile them up at a safe distance, and try to detonate as many as possible with rifle fire.

The book memorably evokes the closeness of the enemy trench works – at one point only 30 yards apart in a sector Jűnger was in.

Sometimes, men would become confused where they were:

At dusk, two members of a British ration party lost their way, and blundered up to the sector of the line that was held by the first platoon. They approached perfectly serenely; one of them was carrying a large round container of food, the other a longish tea kettle.  They were shot down at point-blank range; one of them landing with his upper body in the defile, while his legs remained on the slope. It was hardly possible to take prisoners in this inferno, and how could we have brought them back through the barrage in any case?

He memorably conveys the experience of a trench raid on June 20, 1916:

These moments of nocturnal prowling leave an indelible impression. Eyes and ears are tensed to the maximum, the rustling approach of strange feet in the tall grass is an unutterably menacing thing. Your breath comes in shallow bursts; you have to force yourself to stifle any panting or wheezing. There is a little mechanical click as the safety-catch of your pistol is taken off; the sound cuts straight through your nerves. Your teeth are grinding on the fuse-pin of the hand-grenade. The encounter will be short and murderous. You tremble with two contradictory impulses: the heightened awareness of the huntsman, and the terror of the quarry. You are a world to yourself, saturated with the appalling aura of the savage landscape.

Junger never denigrates his enemy be it Scots, Indian, New Zealander, or English:

The sergeant practically had both legs sheared off by hand-grenade splinters; even so, with stoical calm he kept his pipe clenched between his teeth to the end. This incident, like all our other encounters with the Britishers, left us pleasantly impressed with their bravery and manliness.

The next paragraph Jűnger talks with some pride of grabbing a sentry’s rifle and shooting a British soldier in the head at 600 hundred yards.

And, later on during a different battle, Jűnger ruminates on the morality of killing:

Outside it lay my British soldier, little more than a boy, who had been hit in the temple. He lay there, looking quite relaxed. I forced myself to look closely at him. It wasn’t a case of ‘you or me’ any more. I often thought back on him; and more with the passing of the years. The state, which relieves us of our responsibility, cannot take away our remorse; and we must exercise it.

Having recently read Dennis Showalter’s Instrument of War about the German Army during World War One, I picked up on short remarks that support his narrative.

Early in the book, he talks about the German trenches and foreshadows the effects they were to have on German morale and effectiveness:

It’s not a question of the scale of the earthworks, but of the courage and condition of the men behind them. The ever-deeper trenches might protect against the odd head wound, but it also made for a defensive and security-conscious type of thinking, which we were loath to abandon later.

For  Jűnger, the worth of a soldier is in his moral spirit. Better the puny but courageous man than a strong coward. He mentions how the war grinds down the experienced soldier whatever his other qualities. On his stormtrooper raids, he preferred men under 20 not for their physical fitness but aggressive spirit.

Jűnger recognized, at the time, that the Battle of the Somme brought in a new phase of the war:

What confronted us now was a war of matériel of the most gigantic proportions. This war in turn was replaced towards the end of 1917 by mechanized warfare, though that was not given time to fully develop.

Jűnger brings to life what history books refer to as “the German Army’s retreat to the Siegfried Line”:

The villages we passed through on our way had the look of vast lunatic asylums. Whole companies were set to knocking or pulling down the walls, or sitting on rooftops, uprooting the tiles. Trees were cut down, windows smashed; wherever you looked, clouds of smoke and dust rose from vast piles of debris. We saw men dashing about wearing suits and dresses left behind by the inhabitants, with top hats on their heads. With destructive cunning, they found the roof-trees of the houses, fixed ropes to them, and, with concerted shouts, pulled till they all came tumbling down. Others were swinging pile-driving hammers, and went around smashing everything that got in their way, from the flowerpots on the window-sills to whole ornate conservatories.

As far back as the Siegfried Line, every village was reduced to rubble, every tree chopped down, every road undermined, every well poisoned, every basement blown up or booby-trapped, every rail unscrewed, every telephone wire rolled up, everything burnable burned; in a word, we were turning the country that our advancing opponents would occupy into a wasteland.

As I say, these scenes were reminiscent of a madhouse, and the effect of them was similar: half funny, half repellent. They were also, we could see right away, bad for men’s morale and honour. Here, for the first time, I witnessed wanton destruction that I was later in life to see to excess; this is something that is unhealthily bound up with the economic thinking of our age, but it does more harm than good to the destroyer, and dishonours the soldier.

Jűnger’s apotheosis came in the St. Michael Offensive:

The Great Battle was a turning-point for me, and not merely because from then on I thought it possible that we might actually lose the war.

The incredible massing of forces in the hour of destiny, to fight for a distant future, and the violence it so surprisingly, stunningly unleashed, had taken me for the first time into the depths of something that was more than mere personal experience. That was what distinguished it from what I had been through before; it was an initiation that had not only opened the red-hot chambers of dread but had also led me through them.

Through it all, Jűnger’s concern with his men, the family of the army company, comes through. In the penultimate chapter, “My Final Assault” recounting events on July 30, 1918 he says :

There wasn’t much to say in the course of the last few days, and with a kind of sweepingness that is only to be explained by the fact that an army is not only men under arms, but also men fused with a sense of a common purpose, probably every one of them had come to understand that we were on our uppers. With every attack, the enemy came onward with more powerful means; his blows were swifter and more devastating. Everyone knew we could no longer win. But we would stand firm.

There’s mention of all you would expect in this memoir – gas attacks, the unburied dead of no-man’s land, grenade duels, the tactics of defending against British tanks, and the effects of influenza on the St. Michael Offensive – and its reputation as one of the great memoirs of the war is well-deserved.

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“The Dreams in the Witch House”

While I’m off writing up a new post, the Lovecraft series continues.

Raw Feed (2005): “The Dreams in the Witch House“, H. P. Lovecraft, 1932.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

This story is too long, but it is perhaps the quintessential combination of the various strains of Lovecraft’s horror fiction.

We have the very traditional trappings of horror with Black Sabbats and witches mixed with the cutting edge science of quantum mechanics (including a physicist I’d never heard of named de Sitter) and “non-Euclidean geometry” and Reimann equations. There is even a rationalized, literal version of the dream journeys Lovecraft’s Randolph Carter goes on.

Protagonist Walter Gilman’s body really does journey to other dimensions and worlds and even seems to bring back a relic of the Old Ones. The story was written in 1932 but seems to take place in 1927 or 1930 — before the Miskatonic University expedition to the Antarctic covered (of course, Gilman is a student at Miskatonic U) in 1931’s “At the Mountains of Madness“).


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“The Shunned House”

Since I’m still writing up a new post, I’ll continue with the Lovecraft series.

Raw Feed (2005): “The Shunned House“, H. P. Lovecraft, 1924.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

This 1924 story is, in mood, sort of a rehearsal for Lovecraft’s more successful The Case of Charles Dexter Ward from 1927.

Set in Lovecraft’s beloved hometown of Providence, it effectively uses Lovecraft’s knowledge and love of the city.

It also evokes, as the later novel does, the name of the historical privateer Captain Abraham Whipple (the narrator is a member of the Whipple family).

It’s a bizarre mix of werewolf and vampire mythologies mixed with the sort of scientific paraphernalia (the evil is dispatched by Crookes tubes and carbolic acid) that not only harks back to gothics like Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein but the scientific trappings of Lovecraft’s more famous tales like “At the Mountains of Madness” and “The Whisperer in the Darkness”. The evil here is described as an immaterial being from another dimension which sucks life out of the inhabitants of the house like a vampire, but the Roulets are said to have lycanthropy in their past. Lovecraft mentions Exeter and vampires. I believe the town was the actual site of some bizarre stakings of corpses to put an end to a putative plague of vampires.

Lovecraft links, at the story’s beginning, the tale to his idol Edgar Allan Poe when he mentions that Poe passed by the site of real horrors when he spent time in Providence.


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The Case of Charles Dexter Ward

The Lovecraft series continues with a brief look at his only true novel.

He wrote it as an experiment, and it was posthumously published in 1941.

Raw Feed (2005): The Case of Charles Dexter Ward, H. P. Lovecraft, 1927.277a820dd7a0f4d98d1dd010.L

Tim Powers, a Lovecraft fan, has said that he took his method of plot construction from H. P. Lovecraft’s letters. I’m not sure what specific story Lovecraft was talking about when mentioning his method, but, re-reading this story, I noticed that, like Powers, Lovecraft inserts historical characters in his story. Specifically, the figure of Captain Abraham Whipple who leads the raiding party on Joseph Curwen. The first times I read this novel, over twenty years ago, I didn’t know he was an historical figure, but I’ve since heard him talked about in the Revolutionary-era folk song “The Yankee Privateer”.

There are probably other historical figures (besides Judge Hathorne — a relation to Nathaniel Hawthorne) I didn’t recognize.  Continue reading “The Case of Charles Dexter Ward”